Another change we decided to make was the script. We believed that our trailer didn't have enough speech in it. Our peers and teachers also thought this so for the second draft we decided to add in more dialogue. The up to date script is seen below.
Stacey- That is so funny
Zac- That is so funny
Stacey- Zac?
Zac- I need to go
News reader (voice over)- Zachary Lane, aged 17, was found dead in St Neots School toilets yesterday at 13.24. The investigation is under weigh and the police are doing all they can to ensure they find out what happened
Detective Marshall- The case is closed, it was suicide
Stacey- I will find out who did this
Mrs Lane- I just can't take this anymore
No comments:
Post a Comment