We tried to change as many of the criticisms that we got from our first draft for our second draft. Some of the things we changed were...
- Adding in more effects and transitions
- Adding in more footage
- Adding in more dialogue- including the voice over
- Re filming the first scene
Some further improvements that we have been told to make are...
- Re order the shots- this will help create a sense of chaos and uncertainty which is conventional in thriller films such as Gone Girl and Girl On The Train. For example, the trailer makes you think the film will end very differently to how the actually do end.
- Faster paced editing is needed at the end to build up the drama and create suspense.
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